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Mission, Interrupted

A few years ago…

My wife texted me. “Call me when you get a minute. It’s about Taylor.”

I immediately stopped what I was doing, closed my office door, picked up my phone, and called.

“What’s going on?”

“I had been wondering why we hadn’t gotten Taylor’s email yet – I just got a call from the Dominican Republic – Sister Antivilo, the mission president’s wife. She told me that Taylor has been in an accident.”

“Is he okay? What kind of accident?” I interrupted, as my heart sunk, and my stomach started feeling queasy.

“I’m not sure…”

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5 hours earlier…

What makes for a great preparation day? Hanging out with other missionaries, playing some sports, and eating some good food. It had been a good P-Day: Elder Taylor McBride and his companion, Elder Sena, met up with two other companionships, Elders Allen, LeSueur, Diker and Turley to spend the day.

It rained hard all morning, but they decided that since it rains almost every day in the D.R., they weren’t going to let it get in the way of playing some basketball. They met at the chapel early and played on the outdoor court in the rain. They worked up an appetite and went in search of some grilled chicken for lunch.

After they ate, they headed back to the chapel to enjoy a quiet afternoon of air conditioning and dominoes.

They ran through the rain to the church, ignoring the usual catcalls from the local girls. The church building was protected by a ten-foot iron security fence. Elder McBride unlocked the giant gate that slid to open the driveway, and went in first.

Unknown to any of them, when he slid the gate open, the mounting supports that had been weakened from years of rust and corrosion gave way. The heavy iron gate began to fall, as if in slow motion.

“LOOK OUT!” the Elders yelled in unison.

Elder McBride heard them and looked up, just in time to see the iron gate crashing down on him. Even though he took a sidestep to the left, it wasn’t enough to avoid it, and the gate struck him on the back on the head with a tremendous impact.

He instantly lost consciousness. On the way down, his limp body turned and he landed on his back on the driveway. His head whipped back and struck the sharp edge of the concrete curb with a sickening crack that everyone could hear through the downpour.

Blood started pouring from his head, mixed with the rainwater and ran down the gutter into the street.

Elder Allen pulled out his phone to call for help, but it was dead from the rain.

A crowd started to gather.

Then the convulsions began.

To be continued…

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  1. I’m bumbed that I have missed your other cliff hangers. What were they so I can be miffed with the rest. —In the days of the old classic authors they used this method of writing. They were ‘serials’ or ‘pulp fiction’ as with Edgar Rice Boroughs (which is great tread mill/exercise machine reading-Tarzan series). Have we lost our ability to enjoy a cliff hanger like n the old days? We should do what they did in the old days- talk it up and build up the excitement and anticipation like we are waiting for Christmas morning or a sequal movie
    What do you think? Will he make it? Will someone’s faith be made stronger? Discuss. 🙂

  2. Seriously? You’d stop reading a bog because he’s not finishing the story? Life’s too short. Enjoy the ride.

  3. I’m enjoying your stories and find it amusing that you have raised some hackles of your readers. There is always a method to your madness, so I too will wait.

  4. You’ve made a pattern of this now and I wasn’t even surprised by the “to be continued…” this time (especially with “Interrupted” in the title). But after setting us up this much I’m expecting to see not only some beautiful conclusions but an insightful moral of some sort that either links the interrupted stories together or that comments on the significance of suspense.

  5. Are these fabulous stories going to end up being April fools jokes on Sunday? ??

  6. I have a missionary son in a foreign country. This situation is so sickening! I remember just before he got his call, there were several missionaries in foreign countries who met with terrorist accidents or had other awful experiences like this. For a while it really shook me. Then I felt peace when I realized that anywhere he goes, he could meet with these situations, and there’s nothing I can do to prevent it. And when he’s serving a mission, as is his duty as a priesthood holder, he is in the right place. If these accidents occur, he is being watched over by the Lord. And I can feel peace that the Lord knows better than I do, and that I know that these trials serve a purpose in my son’s life that the Lord allows for him to experience. This peace has been one of the greatest blessings that has come from my son serving far away. Thank you for sharing this story, even though most people don’t like the cliffhanger. I’m okay with waiting for the conclusion, should you wish to share it.

  7. Hmmm. Perhaps your point might be that only fictional stories are ever finished. In reality, nobody’s story is ever finished. We only ever get Act II, and it is always a cliff hanger.

  8. MMM, one reason I don’t watch tv is the very thing you say above. If a show can’t finish the story in its allotted time, it’s not worth watching.

  9. I am going to stop and watch. I will see what you’re trying to do. I will not place my expectations on what is happening to your blog entries. I’ll see what I can learn here.
    I also assume there is no fake news going on. That there are no outside influences messing up your entries, even though to me your blog is from a foreign country. ?

    1. I did not realize I am from a foreign country. Are you sure it isn’t you that is in a foreign country?

  10. I have always enjoyed your writing. I must admit, I probably will leave your posts for a time. I don’t like being left… to wonder and worry. It is one thing to bait your readers, but to leave unfinished for days and days, avoiding conclusions, starting new stories in the meantime, is not what I am interested in anymore. You say Be Nice- I don’t think this is NICE to your readers. I am not sure what you are trying to accomplish here, but I seriously doubt it is to run your readers off. Sorry

    1. You have never watched a TV show that leaves you hanging from week to week? Or read a book where the chapter ends dramatically, to get you to start the next one? Do you write to those writers or tv shows and castigate them?

      Sounds like you are pushing a double-standard on me.

    2. This is hilarious!! We know things are going to end fine! I have enjoyed MMM’s writing for so long now that I am loving these daily posts because I can bet we are gonna absolutely love how it all comes together!! Have a little faith in the man!! He hasn’t suddenly decided to turn evil on us!!

  11. Oh, my goodness! You are making my Spring Break Days more enjoyable! Thank you for the stories…or almost stories. My favorite parts are the followers comments. Keep writing, I need to know…the rest of the story/stories!

  12. OMG!!! you have got to stop this!!!! You are driving me crazy with all the cliffhangers!

  13. Why are you not finishing your blogs posts. Three is a row. You are a great story teller, but I want an ending! Love your posts. They make me think!

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